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Comments of chapter undefined of My Pick Up Artist System

Ayoflex24
Ayoflex24Lv1Ayoflex24

I swear revenge....one day you will read my book. And I will fool you samsara...not once...I swear...not once...exactly in that phrase that you used...Fooled you😜😭💯. Anyway this chapter came as a shocker ...thanks for the awesome chapter man

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YourMamaIsFire
YourMamaIsFireLv13YourMamaIsFire

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Denver_Gill
Denver_GillLv15Denver_Gill

Holy shit. Did not see that ine coming at all. I honestly thoughtbit was gonna be Katie untill the end there.I feel really bad for chuck (Or whatever her name actually is) now.

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The_Bare_Minimum
The_Bare_MinimumLv13The_Bare_Minimum

Monica must have been really drunk to not notice that Chuck is missing some vital equipment. I wonder about the thoughts and ideas of Chuck that lead to his current situation.

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SupDood
SupDoodLv11SupDood

The dots are connecting from the reason he didn’t smash and the cuts on his wrist. Like woah

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WangChaoLong
WangChaoLongLv14WangChaoLong

HOLY MOLY....

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Kur0Shir0
Kur0Shir0Lv4Kur0Shir0

Oh my fcking god, i completly didn't saw this coming, lol, i read the final part of the chap 3 times to understand that the shota isn't a real shota, but a girl looolll, i've thinked that this start of chap would be about Ben "saving the beauty" not a such plot twist

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Pedro_Sousa
Pedro_SousaLv15Pedro_Sousa

Was it just me wo already had some suspicions about this? And i love when i’m right HYAHYAHYA.

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Azull
AzullLv11Azull

Olhe para o meu cérebro depois disso

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Rodein
RodeinLv4Rodein

Emotional rollercoaster, bravo sensei...

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AeolusShu
AeolusShuLv15AeolusShu

bro chuck is a chick. I did not see that coming!!

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MonkeyLord37
MonkeyLord37Lv13MonkeyLord37

I know this was serious and the author even said that but I hope one of the fracking crew *cough* Benny Bevito *cough* can help her as a new arc. OMG BEN COULD GET LIKE A QUEST TO HELP HER THROUGH HER TRAUMA.

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Robert_Marrs
Robert_MarrsLv14Robert_Marrs

Author! your name is rightly deserved!

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Daoist307978
Daoist307978Lv3Daoist307978

wait just to confrim chuck is actually a girl who just dresses up like a boy wow.

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JDMReaper
JDMReaperLv15JDMReaper

So Chuck got 2. Go Chuck

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LaMeraPaipaWei
LaMeraPaipaWeiLv1LaMeraPaipaWei

So chuck is a girl, and no one knows?

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Dekabos
DekabosLv14Dekabos

So Chuck had the nightmare and is pretending to be a man, but why did Monica say she had a nightmare? To cover for Chuck? I'm confused by this by its been an amazing and hilarious story so far!

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Kira_4
Kira_4Lv4Kira_4

Wait so did chuck actually lose her virginity or did the the janitor come in time?

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EricI
EricILv13EricI

no wonder chuck is good at being cute lol.

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DrunkenGourd
DrunkenGourdLv12DrunkenGourd

wait so Chuck didnt have ***?

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4n0
4n0Lv124n0

plot twist mind blown