SamsaraWithWords
This was an awesome prologue! It makes the world so much more interesting and adds a lot of possibilities for the future. Keep in mind I read up to chapter 210 until the prologue came out, so for future readers I am telling you this one chapter makes the next 210 feel so much more interesting and important, like there is a purpose to the story. Good job SamsaraWithWords!
The prologue was written very well.....but for a certain portion of readers (like me), the mysterious aspect is a very huge factor in what I believe is the foundation of what's currently in the story. Having Ben and us readers figure out or try to predict what happens is an important to the story. The prologue is kinda like a diamond that has a tiny scratch on it đ¤ˇââď¸. Satisfying read nonetheless thx.đ
I was just thinking... they did not shoot him. They did not burn him, bomb him, or decapitate him. They did not put him in a cage and drop him in ocean... They intentionally allowed the system to kill him. Why? Could he come back from regular death, or did they NEED him to die from the death challenge?
Having read to 210 before reading this, the Prolog felt like a kind of forshadowing of the future. Which made the Realization that this romero is not the same romero an interesting twist, though one others who havenât read this far wont experience. also makes me wonder about Benâs dad name. I guess for a new person this just gives the a glimps on the world and whats possible, also that the system is no joke and really will kill our protagonist. Still I wonder if for a new reader this may instead remove some of the mystery element I think its well balanced but only a new reader can validate. I also like The humor at the end as it gives a good sense of the sense if humour in this story.