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Comments of chapter undefined of My Pick Up Artist System

SleepFox
SleepFoxLv6SleepFox

Author I think you made a mistake, in the paragraph after AWOO .., you put the name Ben in place of Roman.

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William_Burch_6252
William_Burch_6252Lv4William_Burch_6252

This was an awesome prologue! It makes the world so much more interesting and adds a lot of possibilities for the future. Keep in mind I read up to chapter 210 until the prologue came out, so for future readers I am telling you this one chapter makes the next 210 feel so much more interesting and important, like there is a purpose to the story. Good job SamsaraWithWords!

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Malu_Hosea
Malu_HoseaLv15Malu_Hosea

At first i thought it was from a future perspective lol

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klew
klewLv14klew

The prologue was written very well.....but for a certain portion of readers (like me), the mysterious aspect is a very huge factor in what I believe is the foundation of what's currently in the story. Having Ben and us readers figure out or try to predict what happens is an important to the story. The prologue is kinda like a diamond that has a tiny scratch on it 🤷‍♂️. Satisfying read nonetheless thx.👍

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VixeNiche
VixeNicheLv3VixeNiche

I like this prologue; it has a lot of mystery vibes, it tells the readers that despite the system's blatant sassiness, it still no joke. It was a really satisfying read, so thank you, Samsara. There's a reason my finger automatically clicks here everytime I open my library.

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Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6Dhaliwal2

So there are people who are targeting system users huh.. looks like Ben will have to go through lot of sh*t storm.

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4n0
4n0Lv124n0

rip Ben

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Work_In_Progress
Work_In_ProgressLv5Work_In_Progress

I was just thinking... they did not shoot him. They did not burn him, bomb him, or decapitate him. They did not put him in a cage and drop him in ocean... They intentionally allowed the system to kill him. Why? Could he come back from regular death, or did they NEED him to die from the death challenge?

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Rodein
RodeinLv4Rodein

Excellent prologue, I'm 120 chapters in and I crave another 1000. Such a great story...

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Javo_MC
Javo_MCLv13Javo_MC

This was very interesting, it gave me a better understanding regarding the system. First comment.

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drazious
draziousLv12drazious

Having read to 210 before reading this, the Prolog felt like a kind of forshadowing of the future. Which made the Realization that this romero is not the same romero an interesting twist, though one others who haven’t read this far wont experience. also makes me wonder about Ben’s dad name. I guess for a new person this just gives the a glimps on the world and whats possible, also that the system is no joke and really will kill our protagonist. Still I wonder if for a new reader this may instead remove some of the mystery element I think its well balanced but only a new reader can validate. I also like The humor at the end as it gives a good sense of the sense if humour in this story.

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MJAgo
MJAgoLv14MJAgo

well it's good that this Roman Antovno dude died, he clearly was just a fckboy who will not take responsibility after his mission was accomplished. ...........hopefully our MC isn't gonna be like him, and be serious about the girls he will conquer and b¡tch slap the system. good start 👍🏻

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Mch
MchLv11Mch

2 other ppl with a system?and they hunt other system users?I'm hyped as frick.

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DaoistXJvP6L
DaoistXJvP6LLv2DaoistXJvP6L

Not bad!

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Shadow_Lu
Shadow_LuLv4Shadow_Lu

Currently in Chapter 210, readers who are just starting this are in for a treat! Wish this prologue was out when I started, it adds so much depth to the system. Stick with this webnovel and you'll laugh at the MC and his journey to be the very best that no one ever was.

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Reversion
ReversionLv15Reversion

how deep is the anilhation is it just reincarnation or does everybody memory adjust like you weren't ever there to exist.

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McRead
McReadLv5McRead

I don't get it. So there are people who hunt system users. Yet dude here was killed by a challenge of his own system, were the system hunters even involved?

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Squirrel_Protector
Squirrel_ProtectorLv11Squirrel_Protector

OH THANK GOD I thought this was OnE of those future events i was like

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MonkeyLord37
MonkeyLord37Lv13MonkeyLord37

so the system makes ppl supergods on top the world and the ppl behind it force the users to die?

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Kamilos192
Kamilos192Lv15Kamilos192

press f to pay your respects for Ben..