Comments of chapter undefined of My Pick Up Artist System
My Pick Up Artist System
SamsaraWithWords
Chapter comments35
Hmm, I've been having mixed feelings the last chapters. I like the comedy, but I think there is too much. The chapters are a little short, so if 70% are jokes I feel like the plot barely progress. I think the last 4 chapters have been rewards, and I believe 1 or 2 would'd been enough. So although I love the squirtle squad I'd prefer a little bit of balance between comedy and plot
I think it's just matter of people wanting more chapters and can't wait to read more. I am one of these people. I am perfectly content on how the book is progressing. I don't get many of the pop-culture references but the other jokes are really funny. Keep up the good work!
SamsaraWithWords:And I appreciate your input regardless because it helps me improve the story.
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