Comments of chapter undefined of My Pick Up Artist System

these kinds of people irritate me. they do their thing, then blame others. sigh. excellent chapter, though. very well written!! Also a picture of titjob tina

I just want to say that I have never read a author as involved in feedback as SamsaraWithWords. This work is so well written that when I find an error, I know it is a typo (I have so many myself in daily texting). If I point it out, it is fixed (fast). It is as if the author wants a perfect work and is willing to use crowd sourced proofreading. Thank you.

lol maybe a little writers block on Tina's new name? good chapter I'm certainly curious to see where this leads!

Trump is in this world? I hope Ben can find Ivanka... so he can cuck both Jared and the Don at the same time.

noice

Another chapter that makes me laugh, I know I can't comment much because I don't have a personal pc but I love this story.

thanks man, what a great speech, im touched. And he met catwoman Tina agian, wow

Thanks for the chapter!

Thx for the chapter

Thx 4 the chapter!🥳

Finally Tina! You'll see the new improvement 😂

Thanks for the Chapter ! I really hate those people who do something false themselve then blame others for it

I'm looking forward to the conversation with Tina. Ben wouldn't use blackmail but Tina might use it...

Nice

Sad no more xp comments

Be funny if he slipped up and called her Titjob Tina in the following chapter

Maravilhoso!!