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Comments of chapter undefined of My Pick Up Artist System

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Kabelo_Mahladisa
Kabelo_MahladisaLv3Kabelo_Mahladisa

☺☺☺

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Zephirin
ZephirinLv15Zephirin

This is actually the first novel ever to stump me. I know it’s gona be an essential plot armor, but I have no idea how it’s gona work other than possible time reversal or have the Mediterranean girl reappear with pizza and a way better grasp on the english language .

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L0ST_IN_TIME
L0ST_IN_TIMELv15L0ST_IN_TIME

my guess is it's to reverse time

Nozz
NozzLv13Nozz

Another Banana peel. Lucky slip. Have a woman fall and 'accidentally' land on ur dick.'

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Kur0Shir0
Kur0Shir0Lv4Kur0Shir0

how his luck is..... he would get a dildo with infinite energy....

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Eol
EolLv4Eol

The only thing it shouldn't be is a consumable, it will feel to cheap like plot armor. It should be something like an ability or skill he needs to employ. Besides he is not done yet he could also use the legendary one liner.

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Dark_Chain
Dark_ChainLv13Dark_Chain

Honestly I wanted a consequence, instead of his soul getting soul evisceration, I wanted a handicap to the soul like his ego becoming into two. well, I don't know if it will be great though, I'm a terrible writer

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chockik_9184
chockik_9184Lv1chockik_9184

Love potion nr 9 or something like that, that would be a legendary item - have every woman that smells you, instantly fall in love with you, vide https://***.imdb.com/title/tt0102343/?ref_=nm_flmg_act_48

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ttkf
ttkfLv13ttkf

thanks

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klew
klewLv14klew

a very very basic but fundamental legendary skill? 🤔

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Squirrel_Protector
Squirrel_ProtectorLv11Squirrel_Protector

Cockdestroyer ability

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Mad_reader
Mad_readerLv4Mad_reader

a **** doll lol😜

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Tempo_Aleatorio
Tempo_AleatorioLv2Tempo_Aleatorio

Esperando ansioso para um desinvolvimento maior do sistema, talvez tornar ela um alvo de captura também seria bom

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Na_Me_Pen
Na_Me_PenLv4Na_Me_Pen

Another life of rebirth of something, meaning this life has got to end! That would be a nice twist!

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Carlos
CarlosLv14Carlos

thanks

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NeedCoinsCantRead
NeedCoinsCantReadLv2NeedCoinsCantRead

Daaamn got cliffhanged

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Schendelzare
SchendelzareLv10Schendelzare

Is it power stone or energy stone?

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GrimAngel01
GrimAngel01Lv7GrimAngel01

thanks

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KingConner
KingConnerLv15KingConner

Thanks for the chapter!

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Just_A_Normal_Weeb
Just_A_Normal_WeebLv5Just_A_Normal_Weeb

Thx for the chapter