Dude you had a nice thing going until you ruined it with that weaboo shit. It's New York for God's sake not an isekai, what's up with the gomenasai and san stuff?
dude i am sorry if i said something bad about your story because i now understand just reading it help me even if there's some time i don't agree with the comic woch go to far but nice story to read for gaining confidence it may be systèl novel but have a lot of realism, love it keep up