Comments of chapter undefined of Multiverse Magitech Madness

great job with the backstory, and it's really good that you flashed out the system making it more usable in a fantasy situation.

Good chapter

Solid character and world building in the first chap good work author :)

thanks for the chapter!!

Nice start. I like that the MC is more sci-fi than supernatural. I just hope there won't be a system store where he can buy abilities from other shows because that's so overused.

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yep yep I definitely like this it's very and interesting and kind of new to me

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yeah the chapter is a rewrite

rewrite?

I feel like the simple stuff can be made by the system like a hand gun or a knive or a flashlight. But more complex and/or larger objects need to be assembled by the mc himself. The system just builds the parts.

there are a few misspelled mistakes and a very few missing commas, but other than that way above average compared to a large numbers of books written in this site

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the chapter