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Comments of chapter undefined of Demon with subordinates

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ScharhotD
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I just binged all the chapters. So far it looks good, but you really should consider checking the grammar again, cuz it's really distracting. Also make smaller paragraphs; it's more easy to read that way on mobile, instead of a block of text.

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Tomislavr7
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Some interesting ideas and fine execution so far. I'm glad the king had a good reason to believe his son's words. The only thing that is "worrying" me is the same last name of the beauty subordinate from earlier, as I'm not into ******. I posted a few corrections in the comments earlier. When you make them, feel free to let me know and I'll remove those comments not to confuse future readers. Cheers.