Comments of chapter undefined of The Strength Needed: A RWBY Tale

Taiyang Xiao Long, the super protective, professional huntsman and member of one of the strongest teams in recent history... let his NEPHEW get kidnapped? The same Tai that can easily match post cyborg arm Yang in CQC? This is years later as well? The CQC expert that teaches at a prestigious academy? No.

so three random bozos albeit hired by the Schnee dirtbag company can break into signal academy for young hunters, where I assume at least half the teachers are ex hunters/huntress', shoot up the place and thoroughly destroy that shit while Tai Xiao long an extremely powerful hunter did jack all allowed his daughter to be taken hostage instantly and proceeded to hand over his nephew instead of stalling for all of 10 seconds for Summer Rose, another extremely strong huntress and arguably the fastest person on the planet to arrive and help? Whilst also not even attempting to track them down or anything?

Tai, one of the best hunters of his time, a member of one of the best teams of his time too, a teacher in a school that prepares you to enter a hunter academy. let them kidnap his nephew, not only is it absurd but it is stupid

I like it so far, but note to author: the things that makes RWBY fanfics so distasteful is because it takes too long to go to cannon. Please don't also make that mistake also. Start cannon soon and don't develop their relationship further until then.. Just develop and make changes from cannon. If not many people will drop and go to another RWBY fanfic.

Wtf how can you just completely go off in another direction like that. Why even bother taking him to main cast when you hardly wrote anything about them together.

Rly?! No, rly??? Total and utter bullshit. Dude, there is no way such crap could happen. Read book about logic or smth. Seriously.

Woot part -26