Comments of chapter undefined of Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

I like this since I previously liked this character. But I really don't understand how this can be revenge. Well, I'll assume that he forgave her. In the end, as an attentive reader, I noticed that she changed and the MC noticed and accepted this too. Hmm. So I am personally satisfied with this turn of the story. Don't listen to whiners. Hn.

Oh WOW! The two having ***?!? I didn't SEE that coming!!!! What's next, they gonna act all lovey dovey now?!?

Fuck you she got fucking all the benefits and he got nothing I know 2 months later he be pussy in front if her İs your great revenge is this then you have brain of child(sorry but really angry right now are you fucking mess with me he got lover if you don't abandon after she loves MC then fuck you and your novel with this shit is over if jasmine kill her it be better.

This has the same problem as the other Soul Land story. The MC looks great right off the bat, but in the end we just have a rehash of canon... What happens next Chu Yuechan gets pregnant, Heavenly Sword Sect finds out, Yuechan is expelled, does she disappear? Pfff, brother, although the MC is different we are reading practically a rehash of the Canon. We have the original novel for that...

i just hope she isn't pregnant like with scum che

Really disappointing, was all that vengeance plot utter bullsh*t for a harem member? You know is this how he'll gain he's potential harem members? Where they try to kill him then magically fall for him?

I'm not surprised in the least, in fact if he had really hurt her I'd be really impressed. Now it remains to be seen if she will become a pet that he has to feed (give cultivation resources) and constantly care for her (young masters and kidnapping plot), or we continue with the rehash canon.

the shitiest revenge I've ever saw. he should have just ****ed her(without giving her all those benefits) and then slaughtered asgard in front or her . i thought his first time should be with cang yue.

This shit is so inconsistent, he was a pussy cause the body ain't his so he didn't want to have *** using the body he has now.. but he planned to **** yuechan for revenge before he even solved heart knot b.s. he planned to make her suffer but he ****ed her to orgasm he told Jasmine he'd make her suffer but now he's probably inlove this is so inconsistent the author is probably a retard on drugs, the yuechan isn't even worth shit cause she'd fucking betray you in a heartbeat, this isn't Canon yuechan who kept her word and kept mc safe even at the risk of her life, this bitch saw benefits and attacked, this fanfic dropped ever since fake yuechan was introduced you have her yueli personality and you still want that trash in your harem.. This is how gold diggers and bitches thrive cause idiots will give everything they have to keep a pretty face happy the personality don't matter as long as I can tap that pretty face.. hope this fucking bitch betrays mc again cause that's her personality in this fanfic and you can have Jasmine save his beta simp ass again, cause that's your mc doing stupid **** decisions and getting his ass saved by a woman there is nothing smart or cunning about mc he's fucking basic

Well, while it wasn't what I hoped for, I understand why it happened. After all, after denying his desires for so long, he can finally let his lust loose. And he laready planned to do it, even if he expected a different response. But Chu Yuechan ended up hacing a good impression of him, and I guess some attraction. Anyway, I guess that humiliating Yuechan by making her his *** pet is acceptable for MC's revenge. It's even similar to what I wanted, though the process was different, and she willingly became his. Now he just needs to ensure she knows her place (under him), and not get any ideas of leaving his side and going back to Asgard.

two great novels i liked ruined in the same day (wtf im gonna read now?).

Look the only way to save this sh*t you written this past few chapters is training her....like hentaily training her.

Wow this is his revenge ? This is stupid

My dissapointment is immense.

The collection of pokemons begins. The annoying thing about this is that the Harem will almost certainly be exactly the same as Yun Che's.

I think this was a fine turnaround. I don't get some of the comments here, jesus people... :D

Say revenge, but no revenge, give benefits to greedy little sh*t who would force you to do what they say without any choices if they could. What we could learn from this is that you can do anything to people without consent or consequences and instead gain benefits for being greatest scumbag in the world.

BEHOLD MY GREAT REVENGE....................yea not happening 👻

I'm really just disappointed like legit I don't even feel angry whatever gonna reread pick up artist to lighten my mood

a lemon chp has 51 pages....but a normal one doesn't make it to 20...if this doesn't tell u enough about the author I don't know what does