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Comments of chapter undefined of Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

Eric_Kun
Eric_KunLv1Eric_Kun

THE AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL IS A GAY!

Iamsunny9
Iamsunny9Lv3Iamsunny9

Yeah that got wierd really fast. I don't want to sully his body with my thought. Like wtf is even that line. So because he got xisu or whatever's body, will he become his ***** or something who can't even act on his own thoughts. And can you like tone down his edginess a bit, don't need make him a typical Chinese mc who is always like look at me i am some kind hot ****.

Daoist21616161
Daoist21616161Lv4Daoist21616161

You got that conflict up your sleeve. Wasn't this the man who would kill himself if Jasmine dared to threaten him?

Kyubikn
KyubiknLv4Kyubikn

ah things got corny way too fast. if it was a girl who said "I can't Sully this body" then it would have been tolerable....but coming from a guy who is from modern earth? simply too cringy. ATG is literally a world where strong eats the weak, strong gets more women but here we are with a beta mc who has no problem manipulating others but want to keep his body clean without having impure thought about girls. I thought he was resolved enough to kill Jasmine (which was xisu's only wish to protect her sister) yet can't bang a girl saying he has no right to Sully xisu's body ( even xisu didn't give him any restrictions to begin with). I call this kinda **** simply hypocrite.

SFSAuthorkun
SFSAuthorkunLv5SFSAuthorkun

This is getting anoying, its not Xisu body anymore its the MCs body, Xisu gave the body to the mc and the fragment of Xisu soul that keep pestering the mc and the mc mentality that it is also Xisu body will probably **** him up in the future. will the mc develop double perssonality? Will in a situation that the mc have to make a drastic decision in a second be dangerous to the mc if xisu fragment soul figh against the mc decisions? Like in the proenix trial of heart when xisu did not agree the mc killed the traitor girl.

TheInsanekid
TheInsanekidLv14TheInsanekid

yeah im out

Na1gel
Na1gelLv4Na1gel

i binge read this but ,, i srsly start to think i might drop this i mean he is an edge lord x 1000 + his is talking like its not his body .. when it is his body lol the previous owner basically gave it to him so its his to do whatever he wants with it

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Hurm, just because it's Xisu body doesn't mean he must stop all the impure thoughts (Is it impure? He's a fvcking modern guy so he should know better. Sex is impure??!! Think about it is impure?? Hah, the hypocrite...) Xisu already told him that he is dead and hope the guy that take over his body to take care of his sister as favor. Not to be a monk. This guy have some hypocrisy and contradiction in his persona... Also a bit of thinking would actually remind him that the world operate with pure law of the fittest. Strong man attract, making a woman stronger and feel safe is the one way ticket to make the cultivator world woman fall in love woth you... Dumb virgin monk...

leonel551
leonel551Lv5leonel551

drop! fucking gay lord " i cant taint this body"! i get he doesn't want to sleep around casually but he is being a idiot! what will he do for the rest of his fucking life? become a sage or what!? not to mention is taking forever for the plot to move forward!

sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3sari_saarinen

Fuck dropping

pkashmuk1
pkashmuk1Lv1pkashmuk1

What I found funny is that he has no problem using evil cultivation methods the original guy would never use but sees a woman and that's the line he wont cross.......

3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv43RR0R_404

John_sins1
John_sins1Lv11John_sins1

What the **** this is such a killer, this better be solved quick or the reader count is Going to drop quick as ****, no one reads an atg fanfiction for a virgin mc

Zeke_Ackerman
Zeke_AckermanLv4Zeke_Ackerman

I'm out

satihi_01
satihi_01Lv2satihi_01

Stupid mc + stupid author

Rk6T
Rk6TLv4Rk6T

I can understand MC being cold, I mean that's why I started reading this but w..t..f is this "I dont want to taint his body" bs? isn't it his body now? just make MC a new body if this will continue to be a problem...

striker45
striker45Lv13striker45

i thought MC was smart and manipulative

Uncertainty
UncertaintyLv4Uncertainty

Thanks for the chapter

satihi_01
satihi_01Lv2satihi_01

Klise, stupid mc

heavenbeyond
heavenbeyondLv15heavenbeyond

Stop Switching the mc’s personality around its weird