ForgottenLife
Yo! I appreciate one's own creativity and boldness to write their own stories and post it. And I really like your story. There are many fanfic in my library which are dropped just cause they can't improve in their cons and here you are improving your cons and it is improving your grammar. So just don't stop because of others nonsense and learn from your mistakes and improve.
keep going writing the story on your on pace everyone should know this is a fan fic novel and it will be a AU universe so don't mind them one i want to say to them ----if you don't want to read, don't read, your reading fanfic so deal with it and don't compare it to others its disgusting and disheartening