Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

I hope the child doesn't die !!! Though I do like that the story is realistic and shows the darkness of the shinobi world Mei or the Child dying will just put me in a bad mood for a while !!!

Izuna obtains...

This story is a lot more realistic than many others. The fact that you are showing the fact that the MC will have some hardships in his life makes it a lot more realistic and believable, not to even say anything about it being more readable. I mean come on this is the story of a feudalistic ninja world! In this type of world rape, murder, torture, manipulation, and so on will happen, and in many naruto world fanfictions, you don't really see anything like that. You only see MCs that are either overpowered(aka. retarded), orthe whole story is made by luck....

please don't kill the baby

Great chap interesting direction your leaning towards, Please dont kill the child

it's good the way your writing but to me jigen(cannon) was never powerful enough to be able to defeat MC , but I guess u will give us a reasonable reason as to why he is so strong in this one.

If that's happened. then sorry I am out. not because I have a weak heart or something. It's just too much for me. Especially Involving 'KILLING' some unborn children. Still, I respect whatever you are going to choose.

great chapter....but, she won't die right...righhhht.🥺

You ruined this fanfic i’m out!!!!

the fact that you are preparing mc for future battles and also finding ways to do it without messing up with the cannon plot much makes this fan fic lot more interesting. really well written .👍👍

hi..don't killl the child...

Author...

I respect your decisions Author caue i like the reason n thanks for the Chapter Waithing for more

Ight listen here author I love your story but I swear if anything happens to Izuna's unborn baby, Mei, and Ayaka I'm sorry but imma drop. I can understand him needing to learn lessons but you don't half to kill off Mei, the unborn baby and have Ayaka kidnapped for that. I mean Mei getting hurt along with their unborn baby is enough to get a lesson through. No need to go any farther this will nine times out of ten change his personality to one a little more distant.

hmm, there is a lot of way to make it dark without targeting his loved one, like maiming him or other stuff, it's like author have no imagination, always the same cliché, always the same annoyance. honestly I prefer "bland" to that, let's hope I'm wrong.

Go ballistic, let the true shinnigami come out dark will give rise to light, but sometimes darkness is exactly what is needed

ohhh i like thiss, but i hope the child survives

No brother, it's already too dark, Naruto is already a fucking sad story, for a fanfic on another novel yes that's normal but there. Yes it's not the end but it doesn't change that most of his life is useless because he had to suffer to get there knowing the threat in advance just for this result. My last hope is his sister if even her bad luck happens to her then sorry but without me and I mean even if you want to fix her after just no, the MC can die he can't let her lose a hair because of his personality . But this is just an opinion and this is your story so do what you think is best and me in case I say thank you until now and goodbye.

Thanks for the chapter 😎👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️