Bill_The_Cypher
this first chapter of your first novel was great, i loved how you did the moment with debby and him as layed dying it coudve made me cry it was a heartfelt momment and how he changed into a play boy to a respectable and carring man- you put alot of effort and it was awesome for your first novel and i hope you can continue to make more!đ -ass.hatđ©đ