Dominique1412
I think the plot idea is interesting, but the format is...VERY off-putting. I shall continue reading in the hope that things smooth out after some chapters with the story progressing. So far, though, it's sadly awkward to read. Every time a character's name would be listed, it would sort of jolt me out of getting to a state of immersion. Then, the manner in which the characters actually converse is incredibly...stilted. Even though it says that the Author is from an English-speaking country, I have to wonder if English is the Author's second or third language. If it is, that's okay. Perfectly understandable in that case. But if it's not, it honestly seems like the Author is INTENTIONALLY writing the story like they've done a bad translation job. It's...truly strange. I really do hope it gets better because I really do enjoy the idea of the story with what I'm seeing so far. 😣