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Comments of chapter undefined of The Playboy Billionaire's Extraordinary Secretary

Katrinatracy
KatrinatracyLv14Katrinatracy

Please proofread your book. You have too many open ended sentences. Sentences don’t end with the. Also your book reads “ have you set the date for the part tomorrow. I think you mean time not date. If the party is tomorrow, that is the date. Otherwise the book so far is a good read.

KuranVic21
KuranVic21AuthorKuranVic21

I will keep this in mind. Thank you so much!!!!

Anelyn_Villasis
Anelyn_VillasisLv10Anelyn_Villasis

Nice story keep going

kp_46
kp_46Lv3kp_46

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Shiny_Star5683
Shiny_Star5683Lv12Shiny_Star5683

Some improvement