KuranVic21
Please proofread your book. You have too many open ended sentences. Sentences don’t end with the. Also your book reads “ have you set the date for the part tomorrow. I think you mean time not date. If the party is tomorrow, that is the date. Otherwise the book so far is a good read.
Hello, I am kp (Editor at Goodnovel), Your novel has the potential and I would like to offer you to work with us. There is also an yearly contest with prize $15000 coming up and your novel might have the chances of winning. Do give it a try. If you are interested or would like more information about this please mail me at kp_46@yahoo.com I would request you to keep the subject as (Author- Book name). Thankyou. Or you can also DM me on discord kp_46#8210