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Comments of chapter undefined of TDG: Infinite Upgrade

ElDaniWar
ElDaniWarLv5ElDaniWar

Oh my god nooo. A talking system, gross. Also the trick is very boring... with a store. Pfff... this story will not exceed 20 chapters. I'm sure the author got stuck before he got to that point.

Nezox
NezoxAuthorNezox

You're wrong, I already have more than 50 chapters up close. They are not written but I just have to write them.Thank you for your review. Even if it is not constructive I will take it into account.

ElDaniWar
ElDaniWarLv5ElDaniWar

Yes. you're right, it was a bad comment. It's just that I have never liked this type of plot in the least. The MC never has to exert any effort, or scratch his way to the top, when the "System" can give him a gacha ticket, or do a thing or two to go to the store and buy the Sharingan... Uuuu~~~magic eyes FTW... When all the answers and solutions are in the system then what? any problem? Pff, gift box and huala... It is a very lazy way of writing a story, and it is true. At first it may be interesting, but the problem is that MCs get too strong too quickly making the story boring. If in a dozen chapters, the MC can break through any opposition easily and there is virtually no conflict, there will be no appeal in reading a story. Of course, I also like strong characters, but there are few stories of this type that I really enjoy. If there is no opposition in strength, then the story has to focus on other things, like the interactions between the characters, and these in turn have to be really good. One Punch Man is a good example of this. You just have to see that there is not a single story of this type that is good to make things clear. Endless Path is just the exception, and that's because Einlion is Jesus in webnovel. I also understand the difficulty of writing something, so don't take my comment too seriously. It was just me making a flame, and those should always be taken with a grain of salt.

LoveForSYSTEMS
LoveForSYSTEMSLv4LoveForSYSTEMS

alittle too fast and there are some gramatical errors even someone like me who don;t give two s**t for gramitical errors am worried about...

ZAHID_HASAN
ZAHID_HASANLv5ZAHID_HASAN

more chapter please