Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

can't wait to see what happens to the gang when Ray gets rescued . also I disagree I like the graphic scenes

Thanks for the chapter! A bit sad you got such backlash from those chapters, though I am not that surprised as they were preety graphic. I myself wouls not completly change that the torture happened, just make it less graphic or say that it happened but do not go in a lot of detail.

Drip i feel so bad for ray i hope Moby turns him into a demon that would be awesome

Personally, I really enjoyed those two chapters. I understand why you are changing them though. I hope you don't make it too tame. After all, not enough is just as bad as too much. You need to find a middle ground that you, as the author, are satisfied with.

Well~! I think, we will see some blood in the future~!! EXCITING~

I am really sad to hear that you recived backlash for those scenes. For me they just make the story feel more real. Hang in there. We all know it is to have a lot of homework.

i can't wait to know what kind of demon ray will become....

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Damn those chapters were definitely brutal but this whole novel is brutal so I thought it wasn't that big of a deal.... Torture is supposed to be horrible and demons are supposed to be impossibly brutal I don't see the problem...

Do people not realise its supposed to be demonic, graphic, and brutal?? Whole point of torture really. Grow up or don't read it. They are 5 star chapters in terms of writing and portraying exactly what they intend to. Its stupid to hate on it. If you don't like romance, don't read romance, doesn't mean its bad. Same concept here. Don't worry drip, your actual supporters will support you anyway, and besides, we already read the real version.

thanks for the chapter

oh and drip about those chapters your getting backlash for just make it not as graphic i guess i was fine with it and hate how most are being immature like it your book you write what you want they can easily skip the chapters if they want

great chap ..

Thx!