Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

I kind of forgot whose Ray?

GOD THIS STORY IS AMAZING....drip kun seriously good job so far, and i can't wait to read more 😁

Who was being tortured on 112-113?

I think the greatest problem with those chapters is that they are an entirely different tone from the rest of the book this is a book with a slightly darker tone but the R 18 chapters were a very dark tone compared to the rest of the book.

Amazing!

can't wait for the next chapter

Did you end up rewriting 112 and 113? If so can I possibly read the original?

thanks for the chapter

Ray, please be safe~!

Thx!!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Good!

ray

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