Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System
The Great Demon System
Drip
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I really want Ray to be the next to join his demon family and become the next sin but I can't really think of what sin would fit him. I guess he could be a regular demon but I think with Moby and Ray's friendship that Moby would want him to be a sin
Oh yeah that could work. The only one I thought might work was wrath, that is if he hated his former teacher and was angry but I'm not sure if he actually feels angry about his past
Drip:Sloth and Envy can fit, sloth because he started to become lazy after his teacher stole his ideas, and envy because he was really envious of him for getting all that attention that was supposed to be his đ
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