Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

I think he used the psychic hand to punch him.

Mage hand ftw!

Me like 👍

A small suggestion is to use different words than scream. "He roared like a beast" for a more guttural or manly shout. "She shrieked like a banshee before the hunt" for a more insane vibe. Bellow or bellowed is another good one.

Ghost Hand slap

Thanks for the chapter. Keep up the good work Drip!

author your release date isssss dropping , are u alright . if you want then please take a break 😊 if somethings are not alright. keep up the good work . love u and your imagination 😘

So... Either he has used his Phase Hand, or his Demon Flash. Maybe even a little bit of mind control?

Hahahaha that was hilarious! I love how everyone underestimates him then he shuts them up!

Thx for chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter !

nice

well not going to lie right when I read that jaydens dad wanted to talk I was like well mobys dead

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Author i have just finished reading all the chapters so far and i have noticed that you tend to overexplain and repeat things to many times in your later chapters that it is starting to get annoying.

Kind of getting sick of the pattern of “someone used a new ability that was hidden from us to do something seemingly impossible and then only afterwards is the ability shown”. It’s fun when it is used occasionally, but when EVERY SINGLE ability is revealed that way it gets annoying fast. Definitely considering dropping the novel if this keeps happening.

lol

This books is becoming more underwhelming as it progresses... The MC is just making random useless decisions that if one thinks about it, I just plain pointless...