Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

A sad ending for Natalie. Hopefully her next reincarnation if she has one she'll have a gut feeling to be a decent person to get atonement.

that was unexpected, not gonna lie. she went out with a bang!

jayden probably choose how she died since she like Jojo

thanks for the chapter and is it me or Natalia actually looked really serious and not a succubus when she said those last words I mean I thought she would say something like my love moby this world is breaking us apart or something.

Dude author there are novels where MC is evil, selfish, who does not give a damm about others life and totures his enemies before he kills them. Generally readers will love this kind of MC. But the MC you are creating in this novel intentionally or unintentionally will piss off most readers especially last few chapters are way too dark. No one likes a MC in a Novel who exactly acts like a disgusting psychopathic villan in every other novel. Natalia did bad things but rapping her with dead monsters is too much and I believe she did not deserve what she got and yes killing someone with torture and killing someone like what the MC did is entirely different and wrong. I will be Frank now if this kind of things keep on happening you will lose your readers and they will not even read your other books because I will do the same.

she ded, yay I guess also, now that everybody got home they might hopefully have some kind of evaluation tournament. IDK I want to see Moby get some overall respect in school

Thank you for your chapter also is there a CAT demon i love cats i hope you love cats to if not ................. I will delete your webnovel account

Well that is one way to go out. Moby is so evil, not only did he torture her further by having her kill her best friend but also set her up as a murderer and suicide bomber. This will indoubtedly ruin her reputation for a loooong time and ruin the view of her family in the public eye.

Man I have made it this far, but i dont think im going to keep reading. i understand hes a demon lord, but the constant graphic torture is too much. Make him powerful, and even evil if you must, but you have gone entirely too deep into the torture thing. tone it back and focus on his family, new abilities, intense battles, and overall strong story elements. lay off of the torture man. thats my two cents

so no one else is curious where she got the bombs from? but thats a smart play erase all evidence of your involvement and get tons of exp on the way out for Moby.

it just doesn’t return to leaving the characters with exaggerated emotions, because if not, nobody can identify with them. it also looks bizarre

At last she is dead🤩🤩🤩

Suicide bomber ..... atleaat she will have A hundred v***** mobys to last a lifetime hahahahahahaahaa

this chapter is amazing as allways

Nice like always Another chapter today ?

wow just wow 👏

I think that was over the top torture for what she did. I mean breaking her mind so much that she feels bliss from death?! that is way to far for almost anything. I won't drop this book tho, that was to much if you have any other chapters like this I will drop the book. not because its a bad book but because I am not comfortable with reading some thing like that.

Author please don’t make her have a comeback! We cool right? No comeback for natalia