Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

You know drip it took me a few day to come to terms with this... and after skimming through this chapter. i feel like a new man now like a huge weight was taken off my shoulders and I can proudly say, im ready for just about anything you can throw at us now....

Guess most of the people who are reading this novel are somehow broken, sadistic and kind of psychopaths. I disgust raping and killing for no reason, but what can I say I read it. I’m not proud of it, but somehow it’s okay for me. Drip one advice. You need mental health care to some degree 🤭

Thanks for the amazing chapter Dripipi, this torture scenes were like hidden gems, someone can question this morally but, as a scene of torture this is a perfect way to break bitch down like a log can be broken using pure force uwu kon.

Such a ruthless mc but i like it also i find Rape disgusting Btw the realm where demons life you can make 9 depths/circle/realms In the first Are the weakest and in the deepest Are the strongest some kind of ancient demons/monsters

I have to say that it took me a second to realise what was implied by necrophilia in the title and it did not dissapoint. I am starting to feel bad for her. I am surprised Moby didnt stay to observe and torture her further by showing her he doesnt care for her further.

The last few chapters were definitely not what I expected at the start of this book. I am curious to see how the story unfolds from here on out. And I'm loving this peak into the darker sides of an authors mind.

This is Kuroinu levels of twisted bruh

I am so unbelievably glad to have been following with this book, and I can say without a shadow of doubt, I have absolutely no regrets reading this amalgamations of sick and twisted writings. I have decided to write this all on this chapter as my enthusiasm has left for the never-ending void.

ok I think this is a little to much can she just die already, surely she doesn't deserve the torture doesn't fit the crimes at least not all of them. still nice chapter tho

Am I the only one wishing for Abby and Jayden to die

sorry I hate this shit to the max, no one deserves this. I expected more of you author...

The rape was a bit much

well it’s not that heavy dude the problem is that the readers are very disgusted with rape, well I personally don’t care if it happens to a bitch like Natalia but if it happens to Abby or Jayden instant drop this novel

As a person who loves yandere's (even the crazy ones), this I do not like. Shame on you.

Author why are you apologizing for your writing.Write and develop your character however you like. I also don't like and feel sick to the core reading the end of this arc but a good story is meant to make you feel something. Just don't wuss out after commiting so hard write good story. I will feel really disappointed and betrayed if after this somewhere along the line they will become goody two shoes without no good reason. If something like that happens it better have a good fucking reason.👊🏽✊ good luck

I'm not against about dark and twisted stuff. actually, i love it. but the girl does'nt deserve the punishment tho in my opinion. i just don't hate her that much for me to accept this chapter cuz all the things that she had done has reasons being a bone deep yandere. but this punishment tho? I like MCs that follow ''an eye for an eye" but this there's no build up for me to accept this punishment it just throw me off the story. sorry imma drop this

This story is getting more and more disturbing. Not sure why I am still reading.

The Nathan one was way better. It was much less rapey and shit yet still had all of the torture. I just really don't like rape I guess.

author I'm honestly disappointed and convinced that you are lunatic. last chapters are like crazy shit. world should not have place for people like you. in my opinion u should go jump from bridge. do not try to get mental help, as u becoming food for worms would be more beneficial to world that ur life. last thing, **** you!

Honestly to a fellow edge Lord to another. .. This is too much bro... And ppl call me an edge Lord because I like villain-like mc's... Tsk tsk Moby's not a villain he s on a whole new lvl... A beast through and through.... But what can I say... I stille read this... Corona virus may have fcked all our minds so... Yeah.. Still good chap... I think :/