Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

More R18 in the future would be good!

thanks for the chapter, I may sound rude but I think that its time now to start a new arc and finish this one(Natalia arc). I mean like that batch have had around the highest screen time after moby and I've seen enough of her. infact if u want to u can take a break of 7-10 days to come up with the new arc, well everything is up to you

Gotta say the poetry In the last 2 was pretty good

Not gonna lie, the smut is not my cup of tea.

The smut is really good and I would prefer if they are rare scenes as having many would ruin the novel I feel. That last part with Natalia was quite cruel but it could have been a lot worse. I dont know if he can but he could have made her body so sensitive that even touching the floor is incredibly painful much less breaking all her bones. Also in the next chapter he could force her awake and continue to observe them in pain.

Not going to lie but i actually felt depressed because i wanted to Read more lol .... anyway i hope she gets torture some more its Halarious plus what would have killed her if she actually thought moby would have give in By thinking shes getting his D but actually not lol ..... i think the author has change my mind set Lol 😂 thanks for the chapter

The scenes were good, hopefully there are more to come. So long as it isnt NTR

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I loved it but next time done the peotry it was kinda unsettling to me but other than that I would like for the smut to be a bit rare in this novel and you did a great job too now I wonder when they will kill Nat and also I how an idea consider he already is a unique demon and is going to get holy resistance I was thinking that possibly in his next evolution if he become a demon that can also use holy to some degree like a holy demon

What a journey...

Where did you get the idea of Moby Saying poetry

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I need to know if him and Jayden will be together for the whole book.

Thanks for the chapter and love the poetry

Other man having shrex with natalia? Sounds like a good torture plan for the bitch

I want an ilustraicion of that 😆😆😆

#cumnation

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