I love how you begin to focus a little bit more on the other characters. I think it's pretty interesting to learn a bit more about them, how they think or what they like, so many thanks for that! Definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Well done with the back flash chapter normally i find them some what annoying this one was enjoyable thanks for the chapter and keep up the good writing
i enjoy ya story man but its almost double the coins. id 7-8 coins a chapter 10 to 15 times a day all day every day if it was a little more reasonable priced