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rafa101
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if youre doing donations you're better off posting to royal road or scribble hub since you're not webnovel exclusive

Claire_Kingz
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True

rafa101:you can post on all 3 unless/ until you make your chapters exclusive

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DarkSlayer
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Wizfrobozz
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great chapter my dude and I do wonder what demon moby will turn into I hope something more personalized and stronger then before at least on the level of Jayden's and Abbey's demon type on their second transformation and I think Moby only got the lesser demon as his emotions were suppressed before his transformation and mighty author drip keep up to good work and I wouldn't mind if you somehow got premium here as I feel you deserve it

Darth_Kitsune
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Thanks for the chapter. I hope we don’t see an NTR or Jayden x Alex. Also, maybe you will give Mony some exclusive evolution path because he obtained a blessing from archangel, like blessed demon lord or fallen demon or something along those lines?

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Estroph_Crown
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Thanks for the Chapter!

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Wizfrobozz
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mighty author drip another quick question what ability will Most get as jaydan has shadow and abbey has fire so what will Moby have ( you can keep it a secret all I want to really know though is when will he get it and will it be just as good and useful as theirs)?

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Axes
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Probably dont wanna hear this but why dont you get the artist who made the cover for “My vampire system”

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DoubleCoN
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Just started readIng today and i really enjoy it keep up the great work!

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Im_Ded
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Emergency meeting. Red sus I saw blue vent not me

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EleMental_Phoenix
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Thanks for the chapter and jeep up the good work ^^

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AnoMoLoUS
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Thanks for the chapter[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

DaoistMochi
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the title reminds me of amoung us

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Men_of_culture
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hey author,I really love ur book and give it power stones daily[img=recommend] However can u please tone it down with saying what the character are thinking,I understand why you do it,but if you,please lessen. Am not hating on your book but the thinking of the characters makes me cringe sometimes so I'd appreciate it if you could lessen it

Ilyduskk
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Thx for the chapter 😁👍

DaoistHXZDe3
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DragonBoss4
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Wonder if they can turn Natalie into a sentient undead after they kill her?

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