Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

thanks for the chapter, and while you might be inexperienced at romance I love this slightly awkward display as they're both relatively new to platonic relationships, never mind romantic. so keep it up as you're doing a great job!

Wow I love this chapter so much and I hope he and Jayden can get together (and only Jayden🧐) they are such a good match I like how this chapter goes wonder what will happen next between the two of them 🤭 hehe......nice work author keep it up oh by the way there is nothing wrong with the chapter.......🤔 I wonder if another female character will appear and fight for Moby with Jayden what amusing drama 😈and am looking forward for the next chapter good luck 😘

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Jayson X Moby ship all the way ..mighty author may I be blessed with a like from you

im fine with harm's but if your character' personality is shown solely through his interaction with them and when every named character is part of harem and the whole story turns into a wet fantasy where the mc has such a low iq that to balance everyone else needs even lower iq and force logic that just isn't true ive read so many stories with potential but the author is basically writing with his dick

It'd be nice if there was a girl that like'd him before he turned demon. Anything to keep him out of a relationship with Jayden is welcome. Isn't she his servant? What if Abby felt obliged. It'd be a whole harem at some point! At least not now it's too quick. Wish he can stop thinking bout his d*ck. No Jayden.

People say: a king who fights his own wars, will be a sight to behold I say: An author who replies and is not offended by true critics and clears doubt, will be a sight to behold

It is cliche but it makes since neither have bever had a true friend before better yet a relationship so i think the progession on the rimance side is good kee it up better to orogress skow and steady than fast and ruin what you have worked hard for! Thanks fir the chapter

interesting

i feel like your story is starting to get alot more popular the amount of power stones went from 1k to 1.4k bro noice

Nice chapter, though it doesn't change the fact that I'm practically praying he doesn't end up with Jayden.

does the next arc include the magical beast hunting thing?

Auther pls tell me is she a virgin or not.....

What's so bad about a harem anyway? 😑

ok and now i saw a thing about writing romance plotlines im sorry but I'm gonna have to drop it since romance is involved but i loved this story so sorry

no harem? r.i.p.

I ship them!

Bruh. Don't know if i love or hate this novel. neverthless. just create a fu*king Patreon so i can support in some way!

Drip what time zone r you in and when do you usually upload on a norm day?