Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

To be honest I'm actually enjoying this torture thing. Don't worry, I'm not a psychopath, I think...

The novel has took a turn and it is getting better instead of the copy paste plot from “My Vampire System” and im liking it a lot more now!

This story is shaping up to be a great entertainment! I especially like the subtle mindcontrol going on with Moby's demon household, clearly Jayden is being slowly turned into an ideal servant. It's far worse punishment than Moby could've ever done to her. Slowly but surely, she loses her everything, until what remains is a tool for Moby to use. Hopefully, you're not se'x'ist author. And the protagonist likewise tortures and kills women too. Otherwise, it would be a sore disappointment on such a great story!

Are they on a torture date?

perfect girlfriend material

im enjoying this torture thing a little too much😅

This is like bonnie and clyde but novel version 👍

Excellent chapter

why is it that mc race is weaker than jayden why the mc is her parent bloodline

this chapter made me happy AND jaydenxmoby i feel like shes gonna betray him at some point but whatever

So fucking satisfying 😂😂😂

More torture pls?

Exp

Nice Chapter 👍👍😈

Thanks

Excellent chapter 👏

1st

sound so brutal but I can't wait to see how the others are torture and killed if that even sounds ok