Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

god i hate her... slave or not, i still wish she would just be dead

Now I like that bitch and I thank the author for not removing her personality because it would be no fun if she just acts as an dummy like peter in MVS

Good shit, now he got raped because the slave-master contract didn't treat it as being hurt 😜 The characters could be fleshed out more, their behaviour and any decisions made are always so sudden. Thanks for the chapter!

1st

why da **** is he always saying ****???

Auther! Please stop with that “i dont want to Tell you everything” BS! Just stop bringing things up unless you’re going to explain it! It blue balls the reader! Information never hurt anyone, the more they know, the better they can plan! I mean his life IS on the line!

Exp

Good chapter

2nd

Ah beta MC, skipp. He is dumber sure loser, just lucky get evil system 🤮🤮

thanks for the chapter [img=recommend] [img=update]

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

This book reminds me of my vampire system like the start of it fire power opposite of that is ice power than teacher Leo for another teacher Leo and the 3 in the room just swap personality and fits perfectly

Good

I wonder how future between them would look like. it kinda sucks how i cant how she looks like cause the only character appearances i know is Moby

I didnt think i was going to like the book at first but im starting to get ues to it i like it

nice first minion!

exp

Good!