Drip
I really like the mc's resourcefulness, i was about to say that if he can't run outside then he can just run around the room and that's what he did, just like him training everyday despite all the bullying. And yeah mc is right, you can only yourself most of the time in this world. I guess without his negative energy being taken from him, like the author said, the memories of cruel people and the bullying is finally coming back to him. You cannot only be light, you need to have a dark part of yourself too but i do hope that mc won't be totally emotionless or anything, i mean be cruel af to his enemies but show kindness to those that deserves it
The constant use of the mc's name is making this story a bit difficult to read in my opinion. It has potential but we all know who Moby is by now and that could be replaced with other pronouns. Also hoping this story branches away from the plot of my vampire system, since I read that first,all I can think about it how this feels like a slightly twisted version.
To the author- @Drip I really like the story arc even though it has similarities with 'the vampire system'.đđ I would like you to please edit your first few chapters for their grammatical mistakes.đ Or please hire an editor.â This would greatly attract readers to your novel rather then make people drop the novel at an early stage. đđđ