Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

I really like the mc's resourcefulness, i was about to say that if he can't run outside then he can just run around the room and that's what he did, just like him training everyday despite all the bullying. And yeah mc is right, you can only yourself most of the time in this world. I guess without his negative energy being taken from him, like the author said, the memories of cruel people and the bullying is finally coming back to him. You cannot only be light, you need to have a dark part of yourself too but i do hope that mc won't be totally emotionless or anything, i mean be cruel af to his enemies but show kindness to those that deserves it

The constant use of the mc's name is making this story a bit difficult to read in my opinion. It has potential but we all know who Moby is by now and that could be replaced with other pronouns. Also hoping this story branches away from the plot of my vampire system, since I read that first,all I can think about it how this feels like a slightly twisted version.

To the author- @Drip I really like the story arc even though it has similarities with 'the vampire system'.😁👍 I would like you to please edit your first few chapters for their grammatical mistakes.🙄 Or please hire an editor.✅ This would greatly attract readers to your novel rather then make people drop the novel at an early stage. 🙏😉👍

this chapter is really similar to solo leveling up + my vampire system

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author it is really annoying when you write moby everytime instead of he or him

Well not what I was expecting but okay 👍 Won't he get I serious problems if he down right kill other students

this novel reminds me of another novel called my vampire system but I really like them both the simmalratys just cought my eye

Bruh now i feel like he turned like reallllly edgy and didnt he say sometthing like i wont leave my parents death consume me isnt he like basically a bit obsessed with revenge right now?..

Looks like mc loves his newfound freedom

Author could’ve chosen some better mc name. I Don’ know is it just me or others as well I kinda feel mc’s name Moby kinda feels lame.

The Great Demon System

The image of a 1,75m teenager running in circles constantly distracted me from the situation completely 🤣😂🤣😂 I love this kind of humor.

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Some similarities in the Nurse scene which are akin to Solo Leveling. However, it is made up for by the characterization and conversation between the two which make it more original.

no wonder you said it was similar the the vampire system lol. but I love it! keep up the hard work

The author knows what he's doing i dont know if i am correct but i think the way he did character development by making the necklace absorb his negative emotions it was gold

100 100 100 10000km running just like solo levelling.