Comments of chapter undefined of Wandering Soul
Wandering Soul
DepravedSeeker
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ok now the comment (xD) the emotions and things the protagonist is going through is actually the best out come I could think of this chapter and although it ends in Cliff-Kun its much better than (Empowered) Cliff-Kun like what you did last Chapter, also just btw you can take a break anytime you want but preferably I wouldn't as you can destroy the rhythm and eventually you would put the Novel down as without rhythm once you hit a block in resources to use or a bad spot in the story you will end out dropping the book but you should take a break in my opinion once in a while and have at least a rough writing schedule
Wow ... that is a lot of words, man. But I am pretty sure that guy is either an author with a lot of experience or that writing is his main job.
Inferno873:he writes atleast 5000 words each day and does translating at the same time im just saying he writes alot and the stuff he writes are top grade with the story evolving in a good direction, no characters have died but thats a good thing as you should not kill off characters which the readers/author gets attached to. (my point? when last did he have a break!)
that is one hefty (and saddening) Emotional rush.. but I like it (and btw best chapter yet in my opinion) (also I do always look at your reply's to my comments but after your comment there is nothing to comment on xD (most people that read the novel you would find they would only be able to say this) 'Thanks for the chapter' (but that makes it feel wrong as it sounds like its made for them or what ever (im not really in the mood to think xD my mind feels like jelly rn) 'Bad points/weak points of the story, grammer or such' (this would sound like your criticising there work and making a bad review of it (honestly people would most likely put this in review (i plan on making a review soon (cant tell)