Comments of chapter undefined of Wandering Soul
Wandering Soul
DepravedSeeker
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ok now the comment (xD) the emotions and things the protagonist is going through is actually the best out come I could think of this chapter and although it ends in Cliff-Kun its much better than (Empowered) Cliff-Kun like what you did last Chapter, also just btw you can take a break anytime you want but preferably I wouldn't as you can destroy the rhythm and eventually you would put the Novel down as without rhythm once you hit a block in resources to use or a bad spot in the story you will end out dropping the book but you should take a break in my opinion once in a while and have at least a rough writing schedule
What did he do? If it's about his word count, I am trying to write 2k+ words per chapter. But I think your comment is incomplete as you didn't specify what he did.
Inferno873:Nope1 (jk honestly I plan on doing a quick read of the chapters after the first volume is done (or if the first volume is like 200+ chaps then i will have to choose a location were to start because im not going through like 100 chapters just for a review or something like that) (if you are thinking of doing the 'Traped' (Improved version) I would suggest doing something like what 'Nanomancer reborn as a snow-girl' did (sorry if I always refer to it its.. just the current main novel I am reading as it updates at least 1 to 2 chapters a day and the chapters are 1500 words long.. worst i think it went down to 900 but it once went to 3500 words its crazy how much that guy writes a day)
that is one hefty (and saddening) Emotional rush.. but I like it (and btw best chapter yet in my opinion) (also I do always look at your reply's to my comments but after your comment there is nothing to comment on xD (most people that read the novel you would find they would only be able to say this) 'Thanks for the chapter' (but that makes it feel wrong as it sounds like its made for them or what ever (im not really in the mood to think xD my mind feels like jelly rn) 'Bad points/weak points of the story, grammer or such' (this would sound like your criticising there work and making a bad review of it (honestly people would most likely put this in review (i plan on making a review soon (cant tell)