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HotRedFlaming
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Anyway author I hope u can bear my ideas, but thus far their relationship is kinda shallow, the thing that holds them together is sex and looks. There is nothing substantial in their relationship. Not to degrade the MC or anything but she seems a cheap kind of girl, she should be hesitant to have sex with someone she just met. But, since this demogrqphic is somewhat aimed at girls who love wishfillfilment or maybe this is how the author intended, I think you can dismiss my opinion, since this also follows the narrative of fifty shades of grey. Also, Isekai authors are also guilty of this, their wishfulfillment may ruin the story but it is what makes it popular.

Jeantee
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Hi there, thank you for your comments and critics. It sure helps me a lot!

Jeantee
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Comment? Comment! For me to improve, for you to satisfy 🦄🦄