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Comments of chapter undefined of The Primeval Beast: Beast of Dreams (FGO fanfic)

Best_Human_Evil
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Hey, author-sama just wanted to say that I love your story, but I can't help saying that you are exaggerating !! How does Marie manage to use a fucking time-freezing magecraft?!? This is almost at the level of True Magic !! Only a very small number of servants are able to use a time-related NOBLE PHANTASM !! Don't get me wrong, I'm not cursing you because of this, I just think that it was too forced for any modern magician to do it so casually, if but the front of the story would even make a 'certain sense'. Of course, I won't drop the story because of that and I'm sorry if I was too hard on my words. But well, other than that, I am very satisfied with this chapter, and the combination of the servants summoned was wonderful.

Nick1395
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BLAME THOSE TEACHERS AND THEIR SADISTIC PLEASURE IN GIVIN THEIR STUDENTS BULL. S. HIT AMOUNTS OF WORK

Eskapismus
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More chapters?

Daoist049954
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Mata Hari?

MAGE_OF_FLOWER
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Thanks for Chapter, I hope you update more often

MAGE_OF_FLOWER
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MAGE_OF_FLOWER
MAGE_OF_FLOWERLv4MAGE_OF_FLOWER

I need new Chapter please

MAGE_OF_FLOWER
MAGE_OF_FLOWERLv4MAGE_OF_FLOWER

New Chapter please

daoist832572
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Good chapter

Ryo_Kami
Ryo_KamiLv5Ryo_Kami

Ah.... I know her name, it is Zapdos right?

Ryo_Kami
Ryo_KamiLv5Ryo_Kami

Thanks for the chapter

Heartless1190
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I can’t think of anyone