why is he really stupid? Go through all the effort for a system, then proceeds to ignore everything she tells him like a complete moron. GOod job. I thought he was supposed to be smart. Well, it's still entertaining at the very least.
This is where you started rewriting I think??anyway just few questions.. will he grow up?how will it take for him to grow up?why is he still this immature/stupid/naive even after living for so long?