Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Lion

Better than the last season of game of thrones

Sometimes I forget that it is a fanfic of game of thrones. It's a shame, the series killed my enthusiasm for the saga. Even so your story is very good, thanks for the chapter

I feel a trace of pride from him for creating a little monster.

You have not written the Harry Potter fic for this, I would like to hit you for leaving me with uncertainty but since I do not know how to find you I am forced to throw some stones at you.

Good chapter.

Yep,heir lancel pretty much confirmed. Nice! Anyways,i still hope we could get to see a POV on Cercei and Jaime.Just them without their father as that way we can see their "true selfs" without tywin there to make them act proper. Hope he will interect with Robert as well.

Finally time for him to play the game but when he knows all the players and all the cards they hold i guess its just an illusion now, this novel is awesome

Old lion create a young one to become The Great Lion!!!!

Loved these familial interactions. Tywin's confidence in his families' continuity might prevent him taking harsher political maneuvering in the future. Tyrion's alienation from the House's central politics is a great move, as he is a traitorous worm. From the protagonist's interactions, Margaery is not seen as a potential marriage option, which really props up my hope for a Targaryen alliance.

This man needs to stop being so polite to that sister-*****r, and, maybe, you know, chop off a hand or two, or a co*k maybe, for the good of the realm you know, for the greater good 🙂

This chapter was utterly A M A Z I N G! Dude, the quality doesn't stop to improve! It's always getting better and wow! The politics are being REALLY WELL presented! you're doing an amazing work here! thanks!

the acknowledgement of the young lion

I thought Willas was the heir to highgarden.

Are we in the show or in the books, I'm getting confused?

I gotta say im surprised that he’s putting a lot of stock in his ‘future knowledge.’ Even though his story has just begun the impact of his presence and actions can’t be underestimated. Sure his knowledge is invaluable but unless he’s able to separate what’s useful, relevant, and true from what’s outdated it might become a burden instead. I can already think of a million ripples or changes caused by his actions. Events shifted, changes in personality because so and so never experienced this or that, the cancellation or additional changes in plot.

My only gripe, is that the chapters have grown way too short.

What have you created A LEGA/SPARTAN!! !

dude get back to harry potter or atleast update your headline to hiatus