Dear Author, Thank you for sharing your novel. I appreciate your mass releases this weekend. I am especially grateful that you have kept to a regular release schedule. I did my best to support you by paying for privileged access. Sadly, I am very disatisfied the character development of the Devil, especially with his passive behavior in the current arc. It undermines any build up of devil like traits, behaviors, or characteristics the male lead might have previously had that allowed him to carry the title of āthe Devilā. Up until now, the readers are led to believe that the male lead known as āthe Devilā would not allow anyone to be physically close to him if that person was not related to him. At least I believe that is one of the takeaways from the previous arc when we learn that even as a youth our male lead was only close to the female lead. After several story arcs he married the female lead. But now out of the blue an ex-girl friend shows up and somehow surprise hops on his lap? š This is completely out of character. He knows that ex drugged him years earlier, but the āDevilā lets her off with a warning only after spending time in his office with his kids and later at a restaurant also with his kids? The āDevilā fears the ex-gf will harass his wife š¤ or the possibility of the ex-gfās family to threaten his wife... so the male lead chooses to not say heās married. š āāļø Sadly there seems to be a slow moving series of emasculating events or erosion of character traits starting a few arcs back; this continued in the arc where he is the long haired big sister; unfortunately repeating the same erosion of his character in this latest arc. I love the male lead and would like to stick around and find out where the story ends...but Iām confuzzled So what can I do? š¤·āāļø Time for me to walk awayšš». Wishing you all the best in your writings.
i like d fact tt Feng TY is not perfect, only human. However, d probm i m feeling when i read d chapts is tt he appears weak or whisy-washy when it comes to protecting relationships aka him wife n cubs. this i do not like. in fact, i find it strange tt a man who appears hard n tough when it comes to destrying business rivals is a bit of a whim who is undecisive re eg getting rid of d bimbos around him. his cubs r more decisive in action, they smell d bimbo, they plan d attack, they go for d kill. in comparison, dadi bear is weak, a whim. author san, can u man up feng ty, pl? thanks.
I think tianyi is being cautious.....if thst Lin girl take his warning seriously it will save unnecessary troubles.... ..if she doesn't ,she will try to find moyu's identity ,can use twins against moyu , can harm them that we dont want at any cost... . if he directly teach that Lin girl lesson then she will go to her family , then Lin family with their resources will come to trouble moyu as she's in their way to their greedy goal...... it's better to prevent revenge cycle to get started
I wonder, why let the kids do his job? I get that he doesnāt need to reveal Moyuās identity...yet, but saying āIām married to the mother of my kidsā does a better job than what he has done so far, no? I mean heās being portrayed as āthe devilā, surely he should have done a better job, no?