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Comments of chapter undefined of The excited dragon god ("DxD")

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Martex_lindo_autor
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leave a comment of what you think to motivate even if you don't like it write guys[img=recommend]

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Martex_lindo_autor
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I will find a way to put Issei in the story. I find it interesting to see her reaction to seeing a true harem king taking all the girls he dreams of, "Rias", I intend to introduce her in the protagonist's harem in a way that she is not hated because Rias was shit in other stories, The other question is obviously Alpha, The protagonist is still "Virgo" when he tastes the forbidden fruit nor do I, who am the author, know what will happen, I want someone with Attitude!

BreezyNovels:Ahem, I have questions. First, is will Issei die or not be allowed a harem in this fanfic? Second is will Rias be in the harem? Hope so because many fanfics portray her character in a bad way when she is not that bad. The third is will this MC be an Alpha or Beta male? Although I don't like those terms used in reality, I use them more like tags.

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Swiper_FD
Swiper_FDLv14Swiper_FD

Don’t match him with rias

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ImpureThoughts
ImpureThoughtsLv12ImpureThoughts

Could you just make the conversation more readable Like Mike : Blah blah blah..... Or " Blah blah blah...." Mike says. Like that (~‾▿‾)~

OriginRuler
OriginRulerLv13OriginRuler

I hope Ana finds him

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TheZenith
TheZenithLv4TheZenith

I like it better than what I write, it's xD keep it up

Sevennamed
SevennamedLv12Sevennamed

Thanks, keep working on your grammar.

AsuraTheReaper
AsuraTheReaperLv14AsuraTheReaper

Same here brothers but can we get anna he dId all that and died wIthout getyimg her come on now but i see potential

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Kidiako
KidiakoLv3Kidiako

Pobre men :c

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Blacktiger
BlacktigerLv15Blacktiger

should really be revised

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Forky
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Renpangshu
RenpangshuLv12Renpangshu

Dont match with lolii please!!!!

King_Rycon
King_RyconLv1King_Rycon

Is this going to be one of those first that treat Girls like pokemon ?

Mimi729
Mimi729Lv5Mimi729

I wanna know what happened with Ana. Maybe a side story or something

The_writer8888
The_writer8888Lv4The_writer8888

Hey author if ur lookin for an editor to fix the grammer and such lmk

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

aside from grammar the other aspects are pretty good 👍

z_shade_z
z_shade_zLv5z_shade_z

xp

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍👍👍👍

Iinchou
IinchouLv5Iinchou

Thanks for the chapter

Imaleister
ImaleisterLv15Imaleister

so far liking it your English is pretty bad but we all start somewhere i believe this story has great potential you definitely got a fan here