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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Finally Free

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MightyHeart
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Lol i was beginning to get suspicious of you, since you only kept recruiting guys. XD

Debojit_Debnath
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Please add that there is nothing bad in it. The way people use words make it sound wrong. Like - I was starting get suspicious of you. That makes it sound that being anything but straight is bad.. I didn't mind the sausage fest cause a lot of stories get detroyed whenever girls get involved.. I love things related to adventure and stuff. When I read something that is about adventure, I expect it to focus on it... I have seen hundreds of books that had good character development (that is really hard to find) becoming book revolving around how beautiful r hot the babes are, how their t*ts are hanging like fruits to be plucked. How their jade like skin and otherwordly beauty makes even the strongest man bed over his knees. I had enough of that crap. If people want to read about Romance or harem or whatever shit there is go find those specific books like - Handsome CEO and his secretary or whatever. Making every story a smut story because some teenagers can't get off from **** that is very easily available is such waste of imagination and creativity. I might be ranting but I just wanted to point it out cause every book i come across is the same old shit. I like this story cause here the character is someone i can relate to. He is trying to get stronger and is out to live his life as an adventure. The last chapter the girls got added and very first thing they do is make demands after demands and the mc being helpless as he tries to seek help from his crewmates. This scene, I have seen in a lot of books.. this easily goes to where the mc is weak and forgiving to girls just because they are girls. Anyway I am off. Ciao.

lazyleo
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I don't really understand what does Mikita and Zala contribute to the group other than unnecessary baggage? Mikita can chef but what about Zala?

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Nutty_cupcake
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mikita and zala joining him seems a bit forced. but naaaahhh.. just keep writing.

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carlos435
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Oh I would love Bon-chan to join him since I have read no ff where he joins the MC’s crew; such a pity

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Eleesar_Talcontar
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Thanks for the chapter!!

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anzafay21
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Thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

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magapi
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i dont beleive u author!!(while sneakily taking some notes).

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dragons_fire
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Thanks for the chapter ✌️🙂

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AnoMoLoUS
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Thanks for the chapter[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

Lucifer7030
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Ship robin and Hancook with Mc

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Darkujuj
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Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍👍

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Bay1
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Thanks

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Evil_For_the_WIN
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Thanks for the chapter

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Andrey_Play
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Thanks for the chapter

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LifelessMan
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Good Work

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Xelade
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thanaks for the chapter x)

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skorwolf
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Thanks for the chapter

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ZAHID_HASAN
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more chapter please

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COMPAL
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gg

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MohamedRost
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thank you for chapter