Comments of chapter undefined of Becoming the Luna (bl)

Who gives hickeys with actual bite? That part got me rolling 🤣🤣🤣🤣....poor Hayden if only he knew 🤣🤣

.....S P I C Y. thanks for the chapter!!!🌠💜🌌

This chapter fantastic .....

did he mark him?🤔

Thanks for the chapter

I loved this chapter. its perfect bc I mean it's his first kiss so of course no idea what's happening, lol.

no way I wanted VIRGIL THO!

I thought you did a great job showcasing Hay's first kiss. The whole scene was hot and spicy.... super yummy and I enjoyed it all. Keep them coming!!