Comments of chapter undefined of Becoming the Luna (bl)

Thank you, we will discuss more about the imagery, I want to write better okay and don't make up your mind on your favorite ship yet😉

Light read, the humor is very relatable and I'm already in love with Hayden!!!

The pacing was pretty nice, the imagery a bit on the nkse but still immensely better from the dozens of stories I've seen.and Hayden is cute! I can't wait to read the next chapter. You wrote a great first chapter and if this keeps up I'm going to love this book. This is only the forst chapter and I'm sure this is the only ship I'll like.

Thanks for the chapter 🌸

beautiful chap

Good start! Thanks for your hard work !

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Nice!

Okay so 🤣🤣I am already in love with your book Author San (♡ω♡ ) ~♪.

Just started reading hope it's good :)

Really love the content in the chapter. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend]

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thank you