Comments of chapter undefined of In DC Universe with my Wishes (Rewriting in the process)

this disappointment has been betrayed a lifetime and still wants to empower people, famously loose, you must be 14 years old and must be intimidated for sure, your desires are clichés and stupid and weak.

it would be great if his goal would be to take revenge on god's son

Does the Grace wish mean he is always full power because of the stars?

wtf Zenkai boost only works after the person is at the brink of death or is heavily injured, how will it work when he has Bans upgraded immortality lol

May I ask why you chose Sharingan instead of something in my opinion a bit more useful like an overall Ability booster? or asking for the skills of one said character that's a master at fighting?

well the wishs are decent though the imortality can be beaten pretty easyly since you can just get sealed though i think it might had been a better idea instead of a sharengain you gave some sort of skill that makes him constanly improve/adapt so that he would be able to see anything without anyone noticeing anything weird

What do you plan for his skill the "Cruel Sun"? Will it only empower superman or any kryptonian alike or TRULY damage them since its magic? And can he absorbed blue and red sun radiation, if so can it affect him like kryptonians does or both can empower him to a higher degree than a yellow sun?

Hurm,I don't know mate... I think the only decent one is system and that also if it's not nerf... Sunshine,immortality,zenkai boost and sharingan is...meh? Sunshine is strong but not Superman strong? Unless you let it able to absorb unlimited and forever increasing your prowess and not limited to only yellow sun and star. Immortality,in DC if I was not mistaken is not something rare?DC world is more fvck up than Marvel after all..Sharingan,hurm.. A bit weak in DC? But still okay I guess depending on plot armor... And zenkai boost.. Good,but it's mean you need to be masochistic guy who tank the battle... I don't know,but I wouldn't say much since it's your wish,AUTHOR WISH, after all... Each person have their own wish after all...

my wishes would be to be reborn as a saiyan in dc. 2.a soler system that has 6 planets that are livible and have rich resorces 3.a planet full of saiyans(at least a population of 100milion) who are loyal to me the gravity of the planet should be 100G, 4.a planet (insert the smartest spicies of alien )<----they will help with technology as for the other 4 planets they can be used for mining and army bases that train new soldiers 5.immortality the same one the author made in mc wish

saiyan also have an transformation form or evolution true saiyan form or 4th saiyan form at have multiflier like other form like frieza, magin buu but magin buu evolves by absorbing other i think u should have wished a gene alteration or system that have a shop of the multiverse that have bloodline, abilities, and other stuffs

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and waiting for new chapters to read so keep up and don't drop this story and hope you post soon. Yes give him the Zenkai boost And when he go to DC universe hope you make him learn magic ecc. So he can be able to go to different dimensions ecc

All great wishes but limit the system or it will get confusing to you fast with the powers he will get and all the stats. Thank you for the chapter.

Recommandation use less caps its ugly there are alot of ways to convey that someone is loud or screaming

Thanks for the chapter!

OK. goodbye talk system, goodbye overused sharingan, goodbye this fanfic. ty for chap.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

To be honest wishes about sharingan and saiyan are getting to boring be more creative and come with something new

I don't see the use of a system when he has such OP abilities tbh. Maybe he should've used that last wish to decide what he looked like or what type of family he'd be born into?

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