SailusGebel
SailusGebel:It's a novel in first person pov. Everything that is written, the things characters said and felt are viewed through the mc. Not an author. There is also no magical being that would be able to explain the things you've told about. This isn't a story that is being told to someone either, mc doesn't know or understand what other people think or feel. That's why for example he isn't sure if there was any cheating, he may be wrong. That's why I try to use the language of gestures, the context of the speech, word choice as well as explaining things that already happened before, in future chapters. The novel is slow-paced(the tag is there I believe?), and I have my work, I can't release chapter after chapter and go right to the 'juicy' stuff. I honestly don't understand why there is no discussion between the readers, probably because my novel isn't interesting. I don't want to explain every little thing, I want readers to make their own judgments and share them. As for different persons pov. I lack the skill to write it well enough, so it won't spoil major twists.
I have the feeling that Jet is the one who hacked his phone/pc by order of reiD/violetta? Otherwise there is no reason author spend so much time on a guy he isnt friends with? Also why MC didnt think about how violleta hacked him and shit? Also why tf is noone talking about their relationships?? jet isnt doing it, joanna also didnt even after they confront each oTher, jessie didnt and even Mara didnt talk about the rumor about her.. maybe if she explained her side i wouldnt hate her that much.. those convos much better then her bullshit shell/shackles selfdiscovery shit