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Comments of chapter undefined of I woke up in DanMachi world with Solo Leveling system?

Mastaaah
MastaaahLv2Mastaaah

Tearing goblin arm... Boom! Really? How is that possible? The sound effect is totally wrong and all over the place. You should search Onomatopoeia in your spare time. It will increase your story quality

Retack
RetackAuthorRetack

Um, I never gave it much thought but I will... Thank you.

SirZed
SirZedLv14SirZed

Hopefully he won't babysit Bell, seen too many novel where the MC starts babysitting MC of the Universe they are in and then all of a sudden, the story revolves them...

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Reign_Bloodark
Reign_BloodarkLv5Reign_Bloodark

The formula for stats is good enough sir. Really should consider familia tho, who knows if falna can actually help the MC with stats, giving him skills and developmental abilities that people in danmachi has. After all, he will be receiving power from system that increases his base power and then falna will come as something foreign and new to add more power to MC? Welp thats the way to a strong as ehck MC for sure. Familia is also interesting for the plot possibility and socialization. But in the end its up to you mate. even a story about godless man thats strong af in orario also sound interesting. Just that if it was me i would be taking whatever is available for power.

Antalo
AntaloLv10Antalo

This chapter highlights some of the major issues i have with fanfics in general the fear of messing with the storyline, i personally like it when a character hits the plot train rails with as heavy a force as possible and makes the story thier own instead of the normal protag but w/e the author wants i guess

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Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

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allucard1222
allucard1222Lv4allucard1222

👍👍

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talldwarf
talldwarfLv4talldwarf

Thank you for the chapter

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The_Enraged_Tumor
The_Enraged_TumorLv5The_Enraged_Tumor

nice ahah keep up the good work man love u

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Aman_Singh_9828
Aman_Singh_9828Lv1Aman_Singh_9828

Great work boss😍 keep it up👍👍👍👍👍

VoidUzumaki
VoidUzumakiLv4VoidUzumaki

great chapter, the formula is great though what are the recovery rates or are you not gonna mention them so that the story is more realistic? also there seem to be stat points missing or does mc only get 1 stats point per level?(sorry havent read solo leveling for a while and then only until around chapter 200)

AizenJabberwock
AizenJabberwockLv6AizenJabberwock

MC has like 10 minutes of canon in mind that doesn't even concern him and doesn't use it to get any advantage or become the actual MC of the World, what is the point of not doing anything if all you know wll be void once these things go down? Just get in the mix and reap the benefits!!

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Touya_san
Touya_sanLv4Touya_san

Queda bien o sino tambiĂ©n puedes quitar los nĂșmeros y poner en porcetaje (100%) el HP pero no el MP pero eso se verĂ­a feo, de todos modos no es mi historia es tuya. Gracias Thanks

Overkill
OverkillLv14Overkill

you in a universe where falna is one of the mechanic driven it... even if you had other way why wouldn't you use it? it like you come from the modern day and refuse to use internet because you afraid ppl would monitor you on the internet!! also if the system is offended or detectable then when you enter the city the gods would already know about it. however if they dint react meaning they dont care or they cant, dont assume though, also you dont know if your system is multiverse level instead of dimensional power! the level of authority is different like someone is a boss of a company had to listen to the country directive!

GeneralLuficer
GeneralLuficerLv3GeneralLuficer

Nice, thanks for the chapter

Eleesar_Talcontar
Eleesar_TalcontarLv1Eleesar_Talcontar

Thanks for the chapter !!

anzafay21
anzafay21Lv6anzafay21

Thanks for the chapter retack!!!! i wonder if our mc will copy some anime skills or moves that he's seen before. Keep up the amazing work!!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!

God_Of_Laziness
God_Of_LazinessLv3God_Of_Laziness

Thanks for the amazing chapters!

cheeki_breeki
cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

this is great

Matthew_Keen
Matthew_KeenLv4Matthew_Keen

nice.

Soulcrystal
SoulcrystalLv11Soulcrystal

Wait a moment? He gets all 3 options as a reward? Wtf. I hope you realize that JinWoo always choses what he goes with after completing the daily quest. But besides that, keep going.