Retack
Tearing goblin arm... Boom! Really? How is that possible? The sound effect is totally wrong and all over the place. You should search Onomatopoeia in your spare time. It will increase your story quality
The formula for stats is good enough sir. Really should consider familia tho, who knows if falna can actually help the MC with stats, giving him skills and developmental abilities that people in danmachi has. After all, he will be receiving power from system that increases his base power and then falna will come as something foreign and new to add more power to MC? Welp thats the way to a strong as ehck MC for sure. Familia is also interesting for the plot possibility and socialization. But in the end its up to you mate. even a story about godless man thats strong af in orario also sound interesting. Just that if it was me i would be taking whatever is available for power.
This chapter highlights some of the major issues i have with fanfics in general the fear of messing with the storyline, i personally like it when a character hits the plot train rails with as heavy a force as possible and makes the story thier own instead of the normal protag but w/e the author wants i guess
great chapter, the formula is great though what are the recovery rates or are you not gonna mention them so that the story is more realistic? also there seem to be stat points missing or does mc only get 1 stats point per level?(sorry havent read solo leveling for a while and then only until around chapter 200)
you in a universe where falna is one of the mechanic driven it... even if you had other way why wouldn't you use it? it like you come from the modern day and refuse to use internet because you afraid ppl would monitor you on the internet!! also if the system is offended or detectable then when you enter the city the gods would already know about it. however if they dint react meaning they dont care or they cant, dont assume though, also you dont know if your system is multiverse level instead of dimensional power! the level of authority is different like someone is a boss of a company had to listen to the country directive!