Comments of chapter undefined of The legend of the Golem Goddess
The legend of the Golem Goddess
DaoisttleeFV
Chapter comments6
It seems that you took my previous comments advice to heart. Instead of rewriting the chapters, you subliminally introduced reasons for the characters actions. I only have one small issue with this improvement. The idea of the soul interference was a bit rushed. Its discovery alone could have been used to drive a wedge between Kat and Tet. But that's a small and personal thing. And I hope that later on you will delve deeper into the implications of how two peoples souls from different worlds interact when combined. But that stuff above is distracting from the main point. Good Job. I think you're on the way to mastering Ploting and Characterization.
Leo_Hex, I have been planning for the past few days what to do with this novel, and I have decided that it is best to start it again. I have noticed that you have been bombarding me with powers stones lately so please save them for the new novel. I will later tell you what it's called.
Leo_Hex:No, thank you. You, and your story, have a lot of potential. Watching it unfold is something that brightens the world in these times.
