Comments of chapter undefined of The legend of the Golem Goddess

It seems that you took my previous comments advice to heart. Instead of rewriting the chapters, you subliminally introduced reasons for the characters actions. I only have one small issue with this improvement. The idea of the soul interference was a bit rushed. Its discovery alone could have been used to drive a wedge between Kat and Tet. But that's a small and personal thing. And I hope that later on you will delve deeper into the implications of how two peoples souls from different worlds interact when combined. But that stuff above is distracting from the main point. Good Job. I think you're on the way to mastering Ploting and Characterization.