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Comments of chapter undefined of The legend of the Golem Goddess

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The legend of the Golem Goddess

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Leo_Hex
Leo_HexLv14Leo_Hex

honestly this is just Ok. It's not the best story but I can't dislike it. So 1 vote for you. Still not invested in the MC, plus the story needs rewrites to inject more stakes and characterization.

3yr
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DaoisttleeFV
DaoisttleeFVAuthorDaoisttleeFV

Thank you Leo_Hex. These are exactly the type of comments that I'm looking for. And by the way, what do you mean by stakes and characterization? This is my first novel so I have no idea what you're talking about.

3yr
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Drip
DripLv4Drip

This all seems too convenient. I'm still sticking to my slave trader gut dealing idea! Maybe I'm wrong and they are actually nice people 🤔

3yr
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