Comments of chapter undefined of Dawning Skye

Lost me in the first chapter when the character was talking anout her intelligence and education while using very bad grammer.

Hmm I am reading the comments here and I actually liked all the different views of the situation in one chapter- maybe it’s just my ADD but I followed along just fine. I am not getting a good vibe from Jacob and can see him as a major problem later

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...Did the point of view change multiple times in this chapter? It threw me off balance and I would advise you not to do that. Or if you must, then change perspective in different chapters.

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