MellowGuy
please fix the several areas where falter was messed up by auto correct and made to say do not flatter it tears the reader out of the story realm in confusion as to why commanders keep telling soldiers to not be flattering its a completely different word with vastly different meaning...unless you genuinely mean for them to tell their soldiers to not be flattering to the the enemy troops.... but then make the line "unless you fools are in love with the enemy, do not flatter them with your deaths" or something đ¤